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		<title>[proofreading] Thursday Proofing Post</title>
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That graph gives me the giggles like CRAZY. I love that the &#8220;no&#8221; description is misspelled. Oh, man.
Also, Blood-Red Pencil has some tips on capitalization, which came up recently on someone else&#8217;s LJ.
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<p>That graph gives me the giggles like CRAZY. I love that the &#8220;no&#8221; description is misspelled. Oh, man.</p>
<p>Also, Blood-Red Pencil has some <a href="http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com/2009/03/tip-on-capitalization.html">tips on capitalization</a>, which came up recently on someone else&#8217;s LJ.</p>
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		<title>[proofreading] Thursday Proofing Post</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2009 00:49:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Dianne</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Cat the Second ate all my proofing notes for this week (seriously, stepped on the keyboard and poof! they were gone), but I do have this one:
&#8220;If I were&#8221;/&#8221;If I was&#8221; &#8212; I run into this question a lot in my proofreading, and so this simple explanation really worked for me: &#8220;If I/she/he/it were&#8221; is [...]]]></description>
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<p>&#8220;If I were&#8221;/&#8221;If I was&#8221; &#8212; I run into this question a lot in my proofreading, and so this simple explanation really worked for me: &#8220;If I/she/he/it were&#8221; is used when the situation is outside reality, while &#8220;was&#8221; is used when the situation is within reality. <a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/i-wish-i-were/">This</a> post has great examples.</p>
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		<title>[proofreading] Thursday Proofing Post</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 19:30:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Dianne</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Reminders not to over-do using the word &#8220;do&#8221; and alternatives here.
How to tell whether to use &#8220;did&#8221; or &#8220;had&#8221;.
Linking this because I thought the original use of the word &#8220;faggot&#8221; was pretty interesting!
What the word &#8220;epithet&#8221; really means.
&#8220;Like if&#8221; versus &#8220;as if&#8221;.
More on my own personal proofreading demon: lay, lie, laid.
What&#8217;s the difference between an [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-91" title="Writing Notes" src="http://foxwrites.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/01/icon-writingnotes.jpg" alt="Writing Notes" width="100" height="100" />Reminders not to over-do using the word &#8220;do&#8221; and alternatives <a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/dont-overdo-do/">here</a>.</p>
<p>How to tell whether to use <a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/trouble-with-did-and-had/">&#8220;did&#8221; or &#8220;had&#8221;</a>.</p>
<p>Linking this because I thought the original use of the word &#8220;faggot&#8221; was <a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/when-ot-is-%C9%99t/">pretty interesting</a>!</p>
<p>What the word <a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/not-all-epithets-are-insults/">&#8220;epithet&#8221; really means</a>.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.dailywritingtips.com/tastes-good-likeas-if/">&#8220;Like if&#8221; versus &#8220;as if&#8221;</a>.</p>
<p>More on my own personal proofreading demon: <a href="http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com/2009/02/lay-lie-laid.html">lay, lie, laid</a>.</p>
<p>What&#8217;s the difference between an <a href="http://mightyredpen.wordpress.com/2009/02/15/east-high-eagle-eye-emission-vs-omission/">emission and an omission</a>? LOL</p>
<p>(Also, try to remember that compliment and complement are not the same word.)</p>
<p>What to do with past tense: <a href="http://edittorrent.blogspot.com/2009/02/i-snuck-in-some-past-tense-here.html">sneak/snuck/sneaked? kneel/knelt/kneeled?</a></p>
<p>Why <a href="http://wordwise.typepad.com/blog/2009/02/punctuation-for-400-they-are-neither-dashes-nor-ellipses.html">dashes and ellipses are not commas</a>.</p>
<p>A discussion about <a href="http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com/2009/02/paragraph-rules-in-fiction.html">breaking up long paragraphs</a>.</p>
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